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Saturday, 4 June 2016

Guest Post: Princess Adele's Dragon by Shirley McLain

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Today is my stop during the blog tour for Princess Adele’s Dragon by Shirley McLain. This blog tour is organized by Lola's Blog Tours. The blog tour runs from 31 May till 13 June, you can view the tour schedule here.

Princess Adele's DragonPrincess Adele’s Dragon
By Shirley McLain
Genre: Fantasy
Age category: Young Adult
Release Date: 22 March, 2016


Blurb:
Princess Adele lives with her brother, Robert, the King of Valdoria in the castle. There has been a monster terrorizing the Kingdom for months. The King has finally come to a decision on how to deal with the monster but the Princess can't agree with him. For the sake of the Kingdom Princess Adele decides she must be the one to kill the dragon. She couldn't live with herself if her brother went ahead with his plans.

What Adele found on her quest changed her life and the lives of those around her. She was a strong young woman who knew what she wanted and would do whatever it took to get it. Follow Princess Adele as she battles to save her home and her life.

Excerpt:
Chapter 1

Princess Adele's face paled when she heard the words of her brother. Her large green eyes stared at his face as she spoke. "Robert, it's inhuman. You can't do that. If the child were yours, what would you be thinking?" 
"Look, Adele, I didn't come to this decision without doing a lot of soul-searching. Do you not think I haven't run this through my mind a million times? I don't know any other way to keep our kingdom safe from that monster. The counselor told me it's worked in the past." 
"I don't care what your mighty counselor said. You can't do this. There must be another way." Princess Adele turned from her brother, the King, leaving him standing in the room alone. Her plan must be executed before the full moon.
How such a monster threatens her beautiful home is almost too much to comprehend. If only Anthony was here. He'd know what would be needed to stop this unthinkable act. Tears rolled down Adele's cheeks as she thought of her beloved Anthony. She enjoyed the world one day, deep in despair the next. What happened? Why did he leave? 
The Princess recovered her emotions and resolved to come up with another plan besides sacrificing a beautiful child to the creature. There ought to be another way. Arriving at her bedchamber, her lady’s maid waited for her. 
As Adele entered her room, Miranda bowed "Your Highness", she said. 
"How many times do I need to tell you, Miranda, you do not bow to me and call me "Your Highness" every time I enter the room when we're alone. We've been like sisters since the age of four." 
"I know, Adele, but if I don't do it all the time, I may forget. If I call you, Adele in public His Majesty's ogre of a counselor will behead me or something worse." 
"What's worse than having your head chopped off?" Adele asked. 
"Made to marry a man I do not love." Miranda helped the Princess change into her sleeping gown to make her ready for bed. 
"Robert has tried to marry me off too many times to count. Six years ago, before we married, Anthony ran away for some reason. " 
"You don't believe that any more than I do, Adele," With a soft voice Miranda said, he loved you more than life, and it showed in everything word and action he made. Changing the subject, what did the King say?" 
"He plans to go through with the sacrifice on the night of the full moon, which is in two weeks." Princess Adele's covered her face with her hands as tears began to flow. Her voice trembled as she spoke. "I can't sit here and do nothing. A child sacrifice is unconscionable to me." 
"What can a girl of your small stature do against a dragon? Many Knights died fighting that dragon. I can see you dead before you even get to the lair." 
Princess Adele climbed into bed. "You know I can do anything a man can. She stifled a yawn then said "Goodnight, my dear friend. I hope you sleep well," 
***
Miranda blew out the wick of the oil lamp and said, "Goodnight, Adele." She turned with a big smile on her face and walked to the door to her room. I know what she's going to do, and as soon as her death is confirmed, I'll console the King. I'm in a fantastic position now to put our plan into action. I will be Queen of Valdoria! She smiled as she blew out the light and settled into her bed. 
The door to Miranda's room opened and closed without making a sound. She heard footsteps padding across the room. "Hello, my love," Miranda whispered as she joyfully fell into a pair of strong arms. 
***
She walked down the aisle to her beloved, Anthony. When she got close enough to take his hand, she slid backward, having to begin the journey down the aisle all over again. Adele experienced the same nightmare about her Anthony when she fell into a deep sleep. Tossing and turning, Princess Adele unable to sleep any longer, sat up in the bed. In the blackness of her room, she reached a decision. I know what I must do. 
Without stars, the night sky displayed no brightness, only blackness as pitch. Adele hurried as she dressed in the boy’s clothes hidden in the straw of her mattress. Her secrets remained her own. Her adventures out of the castle before the sun came up, on many occasions, was known only to her. This adventure would be no different.
Her father made sure both of his children received the same education which she gave thanks for many times. She could fight with a sword and ride a horse as well as her brother. She bested her brother in their formal schooling. He wanted to play instead of educating himself. Robert began to apply himself to his education not long before their parent’s death. Adele's impressive capabilities were known only to Robert. Her father wanted her skills kept a secret for the purpose of a surprise if she needed it. If something happened to her brother, Adele could run the kingdom. 
If her quest failed, she would no longer be alive, and her brother would be alone. He would be the only one of the family left. Her parents, the King, and Queen died the previous year from the plague. She and her brother left the area until the crisis passed. 
They returned home having no parents and the country, no King and Queen. Her nineteen-year-old brother became King and Lord Ashmore guided the new King in all decisions. They relied on Lord Ashmore as their father did, over the years. 
***
In an inconspicuous manner, Adele walked down the long castle hallway to the secret exit that took her underground, straightway to the stables. She thought once again of her father and how he made sure she knew the secret entrance location. He told her no one knew about it except her, but if the need arose she could share it with her brother. So far, it remained her secret way out of the castle. 
She lit a torch before entering the tunnel. She didn't like the darkness of the tunnel. The dampness didn't bother her at all, and it felt refreshing when the outside temperature got high. 
The trap door opening in the stable storage room remained well hidden. She checked it every evening, so it remained unobstructed. At the bottom of the ladder, she pulled her sword from its storage area. She carried it as she climbed the ladder to the storage room. 
After covering the floor with the rug to hide the entry, she made her way to Champion's stall. "Hello, my darling. Are you ready for a ride?" The stable hand saddled the horse. She put the mufflers on Champion's hooves so he wouldn't make any noise walking across the stones. Adele waited for the guards to walk to the other side of the parapet so she could escape the castle grounds unseen. She didn't wait long. When she felt it safe, she carefully walked Champion out the gate to the open field. Once on his back, she gave the horse his head and let him run across the field to the timber edge. 

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Guest post: Where and How I Write by Shirley McLain


Hello everyone, thank you for dropping by today and checking out my book, Princess Adele’s Dragon. I wish to thank Kat for giving me this opportunity to share with you about how and where I write.
I began writing in earnest when I retired from work. I woke up one morning with the thought in my mind I want to write a book. I got out of bed, ate my breakfast and sat down in front of my computer and began writing.  Nine months later I published my first book called The Tower. Looking back at that time I thought writing was sitting down and putting words to paper. I wasn’t even smart enough to realize I knew nothing about writing.
As I RN for over 32 years, I learned early in my career that nursing is constantly changing, and the nurse has to change with it or get left behind.  I think writing is the same way. It is a constant learning process, and you never can know everything. That’s what’s wonderful about the computer and all the resources that are available to a writer. Don’t be afraid to continue to learn the writing process. I am still learning and will strive to make the most out of what I learn. I have to satisfy myself because since writing is so subjective, there may not be anyone else that will read your book and like it. 
The other side to that is, writing is very personal when you are doing it. It’s your words bringing the storyline and characters together. There are really no set rules to writing, but that depends on who you are talking to. I have found I got different opinions about the same question I was asking. For myself, I have to make the final decision about what to do.  I been told many times, “nothing is in concrete.” At times, I would like a set of rules that tell me exactly what to do, and it would save me a lot of angst.
The majority of the time my writing is done on the computer through my word processor. There have been times that I’ve picked up a tablet and pen and wrote what was on my mind so I wouldn’t lose it, or a poem came to mind.  I’ve had a computer since the early 1990’s.  Before I got one, I thought I didn’t have a need for it.  What could I possibly do with a computer? It didn’t take long, once it was in my house for me to find out.  I’m totally lost without my keyboard and internet connection.
Now you know a little more how I think about writing and how the computer became a big, big part of my life. Thanks again for stopping by and thank you, Kat, once again for giving me the opportunity to share a little part of myself.  Have a blessed day.  Shirley McLain.

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I reviewed Princess Adele's Dragon last month, so check out the review here!


You can find Princess Adele’s Dragon on Goodreads

You can buy Princess Adele’s Dragon here:
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Shirley McLainAbout the Author:
Shirley McLain makes her home in Sapulpa Oklahoma with her husband and their fur family of four dogs and three cats. She also has two grown children, six grandchildren and twin great-grand sons. She has/is living a very full life. She retired after working thirty-two years as a RN and then began a full time writing carrier. She and her husband enjoy their five-acre country home. It is a perfect setting to let Shirley’s Muse work it’s magic. Shirley is an eclectic writer and has always enjoyed the writing process. Shortly after her retirement she woke up one morning with the thought that she was going to write a book. She didn’t stop writing until she’d finished her first book. So far she has published four books which are now on Amazon. Her goal is to bring as much enjoyment to her readers as they deserve and want.

You can find and contact Shirley here:
- Blog
- Facebook
- Twitter
- Goodreads

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- 15 e-copies of Dobyns Chronicles by Shirley McLain

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Thursday, 12 May 2016

Book Review: Crimes and Retributions by Shirley McLain

Crimes and Retributions – Shirley McLain

*Warning – may contain spoilers*

Author: Shirley McLain
Publisher: Shirley’s Books
First published: 2016
Cover: pdf eBook

Pages: 166
Blurb:    (Taken from Goodreads)
A young woman is drugged, kidnapped and taken to a remote island where she is kept captive in a tower. Her twin brother does everything he can to rescue his sister, all the while trying to keep his business going. There is criminal activity that involves the world. Samantha’s life is touched by destiny as she plans to escape from her captor.

History of my copy: I was given a free pdf copy of this book by the author in exchange for an honest review.

I went into this book expecting something quite different from what I got. I feel as if the cover itself doesn’t reflect the book’s content at all. That being said, I still really enjoyed this book. The cover made me feel as if this book would tell the story of a kidnapping where the victim is mistreated and almost tortured and, when rescued, would become a whole different woman than who she was before. My expectations couldn’t be further from the truth.

Plot: Sam is kidnapped by ex-lover Tony and held on his island estate. Locked in a tower, which felt a little Rapunzel-y at first, Sam is treated with luxury and comfort, despite her confinement. The reader is treated to two stories at the beginning of the book: following Sam’s life in the tower and her plans for escape, and following her twin brother Allan at home as he tries to keep his business running without his sister and deal with a dangerous disease caused by a mine in Scotland. The snapping between the two plots can be a little confusing at first, and leaves the reader stumped as to how the two stories intertwine. As the plot thickens, it turns out that Tony, along with two other characters (not named to avoid spoiling the book) are actually working together and want to use Sam to find out information about Allan and his business.

Setting: Unlike McLain’s other book I have read (review here), Crimes and Retributions really delved into the setting of the story, especially Sam’s ‘prison’. Some details were so vivid, I really felt like I was trapped with Sam. There was a good contrast between the lavish places that Tony calls home and the organised office of Allan’s.

Characters: My main issue with Crimes and Retributions is the lack of attachment I had to any character. Whilst I was interested in the story, enough for it to be a real page-turner at points, I didn’t care much at all or the characters. They seemed a little one-dimensional and even the ‘villains’ felt like they had little motive behind their actions.
               Sam and Allan’s mind connection felt a little weird in a book that, although containing made-up aspects, still felt too real for that sort of thing. I also feel as if Sam and Lee’s whole relationship was forced, almost too much of a ‘you rescued me so I most love you’ sort of thing.

To read or not to read: Read. Crimes and Retributions contains two interesting, thick plots that wind together unexpectedly and fantastically. Much like Princess Adele’s Dragon, also by McLain, the story itself and the ingenious plot twists certainly make up for the lack of depth of the characters.


Tuesday, 3 May 2016

Book Review: Princess Adele's Dragon by Shirley McLain

Princess Adele’s Dragon – Shirley McLain

*Warning – may contain spoilers*

Author: Shirley McLain
Publisher: Shirley Books
First published: 2016
Cover: pdf eBook, and I love the cover!

Pages: 141
Blurb:    (Taken from Goodreads)
Princess Adele sets out to save her and her brothers Kingdom from a beast that threatens their way of life. What she encounters is totally unexpected and sets her on a new path. If you like gothic times with Kings, Princess’s, castles and bad guys then you will like this young adult fantasy. You will fall in love, hate the bad guy and fight war.

History of my copy: I was given a free pdf copy of this book by the author in exchange for an honest review. I will be featuring an excerpt from this book as well as a guest post by Shirley McLain in June. This review was organised separately to the blog tour.

One thing I find particularly refreshing about this story is the fact that Princess Adele is sister to the King, rather than daughter, which sheds a light on something different to the typical father/daughter relationship often seen in books containing royalty. I also love how Adele is sometimes the heroine, yet Anthony also gets his time to shine. Often authors try too hard to make the female lead always be the leader and yes, whilst it is nice to see strong-willed women in books, it gets a little tiresome when the male characters get constantly played down just to raise the female higher.

Plot: The story contained in this book is a very interesting one that the reader is thrown straight in to from the very first line. We, the reader, follow Princess Adele as she goes to face the dragon that haunts her and her brother’s kingdom with an ultimatum: either she will kill the beast or she will be the latest sacrifice to keep it happy and keep the kingdom safe. However, she is met with a surprise – the dragon is in fact her missing beloved Prince Anthony.
         It turns out that someone (read the book to find out who) on the inside is plotting to take the kingdom for themselves and won’t stop at anything until they succeed. Follow the Royal family as they fight all kinds of evil to keep their kingdom.

Setting: One thing I felt this book lacked was description. Whilst I don’t want a 10-page waffle on what colour the curtains are, I do enjoy a little more than ‘throne room’, ‘swamp’, ‘field’ etc. I’m not really sure why this book lacked description and, for that matter, emotional depth to the characters because I’ve just started Crimes and Retributions, which is also by McLain, and that has everything Princess Adele’s Dragon is missing so I can’t even put it down to her style of writing. However, it does get a little more descriptive as the story progresses so whilst, in my opinion, it is a flaw, I don’t think it entirely ruins the book. The story certainly makes up for it.

Characters: As mentioned above, I really felt that all the characters were very superficial. I didn’t feel any connection to them, which I think was mainly down to lack of back story for any character. Perhaps just something as simple as a prologue to give a snapshot of life before Anthony was changed into a dragon just to get a feel for the characters before jumping in to the main story would be beneficial.
               That being said, I am very intrigued by the character of Bethelda, the Nightshade of Bitmore Swamp who works for whoever pays her enough. This book had a clear line between the characters that were good and those that were bad, but Bethelda was this lone-ranger who flitted between the sides and, whilst certainly not good, I wouldn’t class her as pure evil either, which is why I liked her character so much.
               Miranda was the character I particularly hated. She was foolish, manipulative and didn’t have a back-bone. If you’re going to choose the bad-side, stick with it to the very end – don’t change your mind halfway through! And the King was stupid; he should have beheaded her instantly for being a traitor, and certainly not forgive her to the extent that he did at the end of the book!


To read or not to read: Read. What this book lacks in emotional depth and description, it makes up for with a fantastically woven story that has a fairy-tale feel whilst being different to everything I’ve read before. It contains dragons, magic and royalty – what’s not to love! It’s a quick and easy read, guaranteed to get you hooked and pulled in to the land of Valdoria. 

Friday, 29 April 2016

First Line Friday (29/04/16)


Always looking out for exciting ways to contribute to this blog, especially ones to make me more regular, I came cross the idea of First Line Friday while reading Kathy's blog Bookworm Nation and loved it, so here we go! 

Basically, all you have to do is grab your current read and post the first line. Simple, right? 

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I'm currently reading Princess Adele's Dragon by Shirley McLain as she gave me a free copy in exchange for a review. 

First line: 
"Princess Adele's face paled when she heard the words of her brother."

So what's your first line of your current read? Either comment with it below, or post on your blog and comment the link!